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Come on folks. Which one among you is brave enough to post a piece here you'd like some feedback on? I'm poised ...
I've only just seen this Julie, I am still finding my way around the website.
I do hope we begin to use it more - all of us.
The poem has a sound message, that understanding something we fear, can bring a perspective and banish the fear. I agree with Cathy that 'grows like a weed, thrives in the dark' would work better and give more flow to the first stanza. I did wonder if stanza 2 would work better as the opening verse?